story 2
by charlene on Nov.22, 2009, under
5 comments
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Erin Kohm
May 7, 2010 at 10:51 AM
38/40 . . . Establishes a purpose early on and maintains a clear focus throughout. Photostory contains 10+ pictures and appropriate music/narration. Some awareness of audience in the design. Students can partially explain why they felt the vocabulary, audio and graphics chosen fit the target audience.Images create an atmosphere or tone that matches some parts of the story. The images may communicate symbolism/ metaphors.Voice quality is clear and consistently audible throughout the presentation.The pace (rhythm and voice punctuation) fits the story line and helps the audience really "get into" the story.Layout is exceptionally creative and visually appealing. The fonts, color, and background all work together to provide a consistent theme and a presentation that is easy to view/read. Grammar and usage were correct. Images are clear and in focus and cropped if necessary .
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charlene
May 7, 2010 at 11:06 AM
damn, charlene you did awsome, i give you a 38/40. you had great pictures and i liked the music.: )o-
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vickie prevosti (:
May 7, 2010 at 11:15 AM
Great job Charlene ! Your video includes videos, pictures, music and voice narration. It was very clear and I got a great feeling of Puerto Rican culture. I gave your video a 40/40 !
May 7, 2010 at 10:50 AM
I would give you a 39 out of 40. Your music goes well with your video and gives it an authentic touch. Your pictures give a good picture of Puerto Rico.